I teach writing for a living. And there’s nothing I spend more time coaching than the simple elegance of a short, unadorned sentence.
Here’s a good one. It’s from the information sheet I received today at an after-hours medical clinic.
“You have tested positive for COVID-19.”
The doctor put it much the same way, in a tone so flat it suggested weariness. She’d delivered this news too many times before.
I’d suspected the diagnosis. Aches, chills, a scratchy throat and dry cough, nerve pain and wobbly muscles will do that in the Covid age, when pandemic lies like a rotten-egg compress over everything, smothering possibility, spoiling all.
I’m OK. I think. Vaxxed and boosted. Firm about masking up, perhaps irritatingly so.
So was I lax? Did I let attentiveness lapse? Did I get lazy?
I dunno. Covid-19 case counts had fallen 43% in the past week in my city. I’d permitted myself to hope. Now I’m a case.
Covid-19 has come for so many. I’m not special. The virus always presses, neither sentient nor kind – but always smart, sneaky, insistent.
I’m so sorry, Jeff. It’s maddening, the wondering of how we were (of if) we were lax. I have one suggestion: Since I’m a fan of long, well-punctuated, sentences, mixed with the occasional short one, perhaps you should try some of those? Just sayin’ . . . Get better.
I also had COVID last year, but before I was eligible for the vaccine. Thankfully, I didn’t get very sick. I hope you get better soon!
Thank you, Michelle.
Get well soon, Jeff. Good essay.